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Elliott Moreton
moreton at vonneumann.cog.jhu.edu
Wed Oct 2 19:09:36 EDT 2002
> From: hutch at bewellnet.com
> hyemal - adj. - Of a gesture, factitious and calculated to elicit a
> similar, but sincere, response, e.g., an apology which disguises a demand
> for an apology, or a compliment meant to evoke a compliment.
There's something wrong with the wording here, but I wasn't able to fix it
in time and still can't. There are two problems. One is "gesture", which
is meant metaphorically but comes so early in the sentence that the reader
is likely to take it literally. Is there a word for "gesture, in the
metaphorical sense"? The other problem is "a similar, but sincere,
response". A stronger word than "similar" is called for -- something that
means "a gesture (or whatever the best word is) of like type". Can anyone
think of one?
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